RE: these are my designs for today, I hope you like them

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I don't normally do this, but something tells me to try with you. So I'm going to try to help you with my opinion. My opinion could be right or wrong, it's just that: an opinion, OK?

I'm not going to tell you what to do, instead (with much respect), I'll tell you what I would do if it were me, so here goes! :)

I've seen these images over the last couple of days and wondered what they were. First issue: You're posting several times a day, when most people here publish only once a day and on occasion, twice a day.

The models are dropped in with no context at all. So I was puzzled when I first saw them.

Wanna know what I would do instead? I'd create little bios of each character, outlining his place in your imaginary world, such as:

Here's Neo, he's a high school dropout, but a brilliant hacker who likes to question authority. The white rabbit tatto holds special significance to him.

See? This helps to bring him to life making the character much more interesting. I'd also engage more with others here on Hive, it truly is a great way to get noticed by leaving thoughtful comments such as this (If I may toot my own horn for a second). :)

I'd be sure to have some effort shown not only in the models, but in the post itself. You created a post after this one with a graphic which simply said: "Follow Me" I wouldn't have done that as that's frowned upon here and may be seen as a low-effort post.

Instead, I would have written something along the lines of explaining what I'm doing with my artwork, fleshing out the world they inhabit, and engageing with the community (in a non-spammy way) to generate more feedback for improvement.

Like I said, this is all just my opinion and it could all be wrong, but I don't think so. :)

So that's about all I have. Here's to wishing you the very best here on Hive! :)



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This person just steals art from the internet. That's why you didn't get an answer

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