As I mentioned yesterday,
I removed the intro to the song, and added a little B section/break in the middle (it's relatively short, but is a nice little change of pace). I also added a few new instruments in that section, along with an electric piano melody over the A section before and after the break. I think this worked well, and breaks up the repetition nicely. Additionally, this is my official submission for this week's Music and Lore contest, from Splinterlands! Let's go through it!
You can see the B section
in the overview, where there are suddenly new Blues in both tracks 1, 2 and 3. The basic progression for it is in our relative major of F, beginning on an Fmaj7, then a G, back to F(sus2), then an Eb (bVii), G, and Csus4, before we move back into the A section (in Dminor). Tracks 4 and 5 are used in the B section, providing the synths in the background, and also to accent the 1st beat of each A section. Finally, we have Track 7, the electric piano from Native Instruments, which plays a simple little melody line over two of the A sections. Both Track 1's chords for the B section, and the Track 7 Melody are pictured below.
Track 1, New B Section.
Track 7, Electric Piano Melody.
Hope you like the changes! Support the other contestants here with some upvotes!