RE: Tasteless To Taste

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This is a well-structured piece. You explain your childhood experience, which seems to have prepared for a life of conflict. Fortunately, you married someone with a completely different background. Rather than conflict, your husband is inclined toward peace and conciliation. As a reaction to his demeanor, love grew in you.

You use dialog well in here and your evolution as a character in your own piece is very clear.

Thank you for sharing this with us, @abigail04



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