RE: The Shadow of Lies : A Story in Three Acts
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Hello @hdmed,
We are pleased that you have written a piece for the Inkwell community. It is obvious from your story in three acts that you have good control of the English language. You have the ability to share your thoughts clearly. This is the foundation of writing. However, your piece today does not fit into the Inkwell writing guidelines. We accept stories, but not stories that have overt moral lessons such as this:
A story that highlights the dangers of concealment and lies in the financial sphere, and which emphasizes the importance of communication and trust in building lasting and healthy relationships.
Financial infidelity is not a matter of money, but of respect and honesty. It is a poison that can infiltrate the strongest couples, weaken them and break them. But it is always possible to choose the path of reconstruction, to forgive each other and to regain lost trust, to build a more solid and transparent future.
The shadow of lies may hang over couples, but the light of truth can always save them.
You can check out our most recent prompt post for more specific guidelines about publishing in the community.
We hope you write for us again,within the framework of the Inkwell's community rules.
Thank you.
Thank you for your feedback and letting me know about the Inkwell community's guidelines. I appreciate you recognizing my control of the language and storytelling ability.
While I understand the preference for stories without overt moral lessons, I can see how my portrayal of financial infidelity might be interpreted that way.