Isabella's Redemption— A Journey Through Time.

Once upon a time in a far-off land there lived a boss lady called Isabella. She was renowned for her elegance, wit, and knowledge, but little did her world know that she had a mystical and also powerful gift-- a special soul with the ability of uniting with a time machine embedded on her head, to do her bidding.

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This time machine enabled her to take trips to any point in time she wanted...however sadly, Isabella utilized this amazing power for her very own self-centered interests caring less about the effects it had on others.

Isabella's wickedness, and stony heart had no bounds. She always took trips back in time to get priceless materials, control the stock market, and also modify historic occasions to guarantee her success as well as wealth. Her callous passion was sustained by her wish for power and she appeared unstoppable.

As Isabella displayed her egocentric gains, the rest of the world suffered from the unintentional repercussions of her activities. The timelines were interrupted, creating turmoil as well as complication amongst the innocent souls. People's lives were for life modified and also the very fabric of historical background started to untangle.

One day, as Isabella outlined her grand plan, she couldn't help but notice a strange old woman in a deserted alley. The woman's eyes appeared to pass right into Isabella's spirit, disclosing her improbity. "You possess one of the world's greatest power girl however, you have actually chosen to utilize it for individual gain." the old lady claimed with an austere voice.

Unfazed, Isabella arrogantly reacted "And what do you know about it? this power is mine, and I can definitely do whatever I wish to!"

The old woman bent her head sadly. "You might think that way now, but I can tell you, that you will certainly find out the effects of your activities. Obviously, you have the power to transform history itself, however with great power comes great duty."

Isabella discounted the woman's words, as well as continued her evil ways. Nevertheless, destiny had something in store for her. On one of her time-traveling experiences after that old woman's speech, she unintentionally changed a very vital historic occasion leading to ravaging repercussions, on numerous lives— unexplainable disappearing of innocent people.

All fingers instantly pointed towards her, because she was definitely the only one capable of using the time machine. Shame, as well as remorse, cleaned all over her....she understood the major error she had actually made in her quest of individual gain, and the weight of her actions did burden her seriously.

Looking for redemption, Isabella went back to the old woman, asking for her help and support. "I have actually created a lot of discomfort and also suffering in the life of these people," Isabella admitted tearfully. "Please, assist me make things right."

The old woman responded affectionately, offering Isabella with a job that would certainly show her changed heart. "You need to utilize your time machine, to take a trip back to the defining moment you had actually changed." the old woman stated, her voice loud, clear, and caring too. "This time, you should make sure historic events unravel as they need to, even if it implies encountering hard options."

As Isabella started this trip she came across countless difficulties together with lures, to utilize her power for self-seeking gains once more. In a particular instance while checking out a war-torn age, she was lured to capitalize on the destruction, and hoard some gold coins for herself.

Nonetheless, a sensible old soldier called William that had actually experienced the scariest of battles, was able to change Isabella's first intent. "You have the power to bring tranquility to this land however you need to choose and decide carefully." William said after he saw the machine on her head, his eyes filled with both fatigue as well as hope.

Isabella was repositioned by William's words, understanding the enormous obligation she had on her shoulders. With decision, she reserved her self-indulgent needs, and made use of her time machine to restore what caused the destructive change in her world, and also helped in moving much-needed clinical products plus food to people in her world who got injured, because of the sudden disappearance of certain individuals, playing an essential duty in alleviating their discomfort.

As Isabella progressed with her trip, she ran into a team of historians that were enthusiastic about maintaining the things of the past. They had actually been relentlessly working to reverse the damages brought on, by her meddling with historic occasions.

Among the historians, Professor Wilson came close to Isabella meticulously. "We value your initiatives to deal with the timeline however we should stay alert. Your power is extremely delicate and as such, any type of tiny adjustment can result in substantial effects."

Isabella responded, recognizing the gravity of her selfish actions. "I assure you that I will be cautious, I have actually seen with my eyes the repercussions of carelessness and I will certainly utilize my power sensibly from now henceforth."

This journey in the direction of redemption was challenging for Isabella however, with each act of compassion plus altruism, she really felt a feeling of satisfaction that she had never ever experienced. Gradually, she started to gain trust and love even from those who had lost loved ones due to her old and selfish attitude.

As Isabella's online reputation as a good-hearted leader continued to expand, she influenced others to utilize their very own capabilities for the higher good.

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She created partnerships with similar people, and along with each other, they functioned to attend to the world's most important issues.

And so, the then wicked, and selfish boss lady ( Isabella), learnt her lesson as well as welcomed her power to make a distinction worldwide. Although, she still utilized her time machine, this time she did it without her very own self-centered passions but solely for the higher good of humankind. With her makeover, she proved that even the darkest of hearts can locate redemption, and even become a role model for others.

Thanks For Reading.



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The premise of a character with a time machine in their head is imaginative. The idea of them using it selfishly at first provides a solid character arc.

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The idea of your story is very creative and I'm glad Isabella finally found the right path to help humanity with her gift.
Nice story, very creative
Thanks for sharing
The pictures are awesome too 😍❤️

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Beautiful script, every heart needs direction and even those that were misled and are willing to retrace always have hearts willing to accept

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Yeah!!
Thanks once more, for reading

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A familiar theme of the time-traveler who upsets the fabric of time. Your story, whilst creative, relies a little too heavily on narration, causing an imbalance between the dynamic trio of narrative, action, and dialogue. This results in a piece that leaves little to the imagination of the reader as they are largely told what happens in the story instead of learning it though more subtle cues and character engagement. You can find out more about how re-balancing the dynamic trio can improve your writing, from the links below. I have also shared a couple of articles that you may find of interest, which could help you to elevate your stories.

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A familiar theme of the time-traveler who upsets the fabric of time.

Yep the story, was inspired, by the movie "The Time Machine."

Your story, whilst creative, relies a little too heavily on narration, causing an imbalance between the dynamic trio of narrative, action, and dialogue.

Thank you, I got carried away, by the story telling 😅.

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Thank you, I got carried away, by the story telling 😅.

It's easily done 😊. We shall look forward to your next story to see where you take us!

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You told a creative story, and I wanted to see Isabella having more action in this story. Isabella learned a valuable lesson.
I kept reading till the end, it was entertaining. 😀
Thanks for sharing.

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You told a creative story, and I wanted to see Isabella having more action in this story.

Yeah I actually wanted to...but just had to make it a short story, so as to fit it into the community🙃.

I kept reading till the end, it was entertaining. 😀
Thanks for sharing.

I'm glad you loved it thanks for reading.

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