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RE: Leaving the world to follow behind

in OCD11 months ago

Hats off to you for pressing with such heat the words of thoughts so clearly deep for most who's souls can only keep. In ever sleep what do we meet? Our deeds in life, wasted or reaped? To what end, are words between friends, and do they echo onward? Should I think upon dark thoughts, of which I am the father? Like generations, dust to dust, what should make us so different? Not a thing, but choiceless trust, upon the surface, smiling. But generations, decayed rust, enjoyed the tides like brining. To be cooked in a furnace and proceed in whining? So, we should live a life of violence, not sadistic, but of action. Or is carpe diem just a farce, and proof, therefore our brevity. Or should we joke and laugh today, living life in levity? Such questions are folly, for on the day we cease our crawling, we will no longer be, or we will stand and walk away, through new gates, our journey's fated. The microscope unveiled the secret, energy is ever-changing, but ne'er does it disappear from even our existence. So, maybe outside, of tortured mind, is some form of divine design, to which we will not comprehend until the day our path does bend, and slipping from our clay-born skin, we find the truth in lasting light, that exists behind closed eyes, and even in the darkness.

Thanks for sharing brother! This was incredibly well written @tarazkp!

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What an awesome comment!!!

I'm glad that you liked it. Your piece was moving and unlocked some creativity. It also seemed the only way to communicate effectively the things I wanted to say in relation to your post. The caliber of your writing and thoughts required more thought to respond than just a simple comment. Some of the better words I've read. Great job communicating the mental blunder of existence few can project. :)

Writing is both an escape and an exploration, depending on the attention paid and the willingness to dive or the desire to avoid for me. Generally, I think more than I write. I think if more people wrote at length, they would have less issues dealing in life.

I agree. :) Writing has helped me to put my thinking in context, better organizing my life for future trajectory and has even helped my speech. I'm not much of a speaker. Due to the fact that I think multi-level thoughts, it makes it very difficult to relay information simplistically. Communicating requires stringed arguments, which must be ordered in an understandable way. My thinking has not always followed these guidelines, but through writing many thousands of words I have greatly improved!

My thinking has not always followed these guidelines, but through writing many thousands of words I have greatly improved!

I think that writing can slow down the mind enough to process with more focus. Some of the creativity of mind could even be lost while writing, but there are pros and cons to everything :)

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